It was a beautiful journey
Down the green mountain valley.
Cheerful and gay
I looked forward to every day.
The noise of the engine
Never spoiled our chatter;
The sounds of others around
Was lost in our laughter.
My mind persists still
On those scenes from our window sill.
Never ceased to amaze – that view,
Fresher than the morning dew.
Intoxicated as ever
Always living in present and past
Never did we look ahead
Journeys like this can never last.
When we halted in a little town
A few amongst us had to get down.
As if by magic or by fate’s little spin
We were in dismay, when our numbers did thin!
My time did come as well
Like a full stop at end of every prose.
Inevitable as it is, for any scene in life
This one too, shall come to a close.
I vacantly stare, so seemingly empty
Yet seeking from within an adventure of plenty.
Is that the sight of the lifting fog?
Or is this my heart shedding a gentle sob?
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A touch of melancholy, a dose of nostalgia, a splash of joy hidden beneath! Happy journeys to which ever your next train takes you. I really liked your poem and it’s innuendos, it’s message. While itching to know more about it… I have to say your poem has a deeper effect that makes me not ask the reason for it!
“Is that the sight of lifting fog?” So be it! Cheer up and gear up for the adventure ahead! After all change is inevitable and sometimes essential too!
All the very best for your assignment …wen leaving to UK .
Good luck to you!
That’s the beauty of life Rajesh… One can never comprehend the ideas and plans of the Supreme Master for us. ..I wish you have a more successful and a happier life in the coming years. ..ALL THE BEST
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God is always with u and also yr mothers blessings also don’t worry about your future take everything in the positive way I know it is easy to say difficult to do.ever loving mom
Superb RajaP-oet !!
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